Well it's not a bad start, just let me point out a few things. The phrase with him keeping a clean nose is ok, but you shouldn't overuse it, for it to be used three times, the first part was a little too short.
The next thing.. how long was he in basic? Seems like a pretty long time, if you say they were still able to recognize each other. You should give us this info, go little bit more into detail.
Also you mention Dimbo sending Moss a Holo, that seemed pretty recent, why shouldn't be able to recognize him if he has seen him a few days ago in a Holo?
Dimbo also talks about his fellow havoc member and hopes he isn't just fresh out of basic and was invited to havoc, but isn't that essentially what happened to Dimbo? Seems kinda conceited if he doesn't want a fellow who has gone through the same ordeal as him just because he thinks he's better than anyone.
Apart from that... it's a good read and I'm looking forward to the next issue.
